All Comments on 'An Opportunity Not To Be Missed Ch. 25'

Well done again Bambigirl, another outstanding story, the description of Alison's uniform and lingerie really build the story up.

I wasnt sure if I would like it when you decided to start writing about Mandy's mom, but I love these tales.

Hope to hear more of them.

You just keep getting better! How about some details about Alison's current situation with Ted? And don't forget about George's homecoming with Mandy!

.. reading this .. I have been checking the sighteveryday and waiting for the next installment and it was well worth the wait .. The spanking was OMG !!! I love these stories .. I would like it though if you would have THEM take her bra off before she gets into it .. I like it when she is a little reluctant to share her nipples and then she gets into it as they are sucking them .. all in all .. you are my fave writter ,, please keep the stories cumming

Always coming back to literotica just to look out for your next episodes!! Love them all... please keep on writing!!

This is definitely a return to form!! I loved the setting! Dingy, grotty newsagent and a perv for a manager. When I read of the setting i immediately thought that this was prime time for alot of dirty old men to descend upon the place. I checked to see how many pages there were for the story and was delighted to see 4!! I thought as i said that there would be lots of encounters with seedy customers because of the huge selection of top-shelf material and my mind was in overdrive. Unfortunately those encounters never materialised and i thought you missed out there a little although i was still pleased having finished the story. The spanking part was superb... i could barely believe what i was reading when i came to that part. More of that please!! I still think that the old men get their 'prize' too easily without much of a fight and you cut to the penultimate sex act too quickly. She literally let him have his way. Anyways, these are minor and probably only bother me. What've you got in store for the next story??

For the last few weeks I have been checking her every day looking for another addition and finally we get one. Another great story and 4 pages long at that. Keep up the great work. You are my favorite writer here.

I love your stories, they are always so hot and I am a girl with similar attributes always gets me off...

Bambi... you're back with a bang! And in no simpler terms, that bang is very loud. After what came before, it is so pleasing to see you return to your old ways again.

When you use your core assets, upskirt, lingerie, making the men lust over the prize for a long time before getting the reward, which in turns lures your reader and entices them, you result in exactly what we have witnessed.

For the first time, I think you have taken your writing to the next level. Somehwere it is hard to back down from. For good or worse. Your choice. If you continue writing like this, you will be a great, great, writer. The thought of her sorting out the porn magazines, and what goes through brians mind. Good start. The upskirt. Good. The lingerie, good. The point of getting her to pose for him in his favorite porn pic, genious. The spanking, while he uses the moment to tickle her and view her lace panties. Stunning.

A piece of advice. It would have been more fantasy fulfilling, if he kept her in that pose, you

described her again, so readers would see it again, and have him enjoy her in that exact pose, continually descibing her again.

To complement this chapter more, I think no reader will have missed, or maybe even remembered someone called Mandy.

To have Alison wholly control the chapter is what I can say is the best complement to your talent this time round.

It derserves a 9/10.

Unknowingly, I believe you have both asked and answered the question.

To not see such a level again, is wholly in your hands.

Keep writing. Interested to see the return of Mandy. Quite excited now.

As always i love all of your stories - brilliant descriptions and characters. (you must have the most fans on this site!)Would love to have more real abusing and degrading of the sexy young Mandy & Alison (i still like the idea of midgets and freaks!). Nothing too extreme but definately more underwear ripping, tit fucking, mild tit torture and spanking and the emphasis on non-consent. Brilliant work though - keep going - PLEASE!

Fantastic. I agree with Read this!

Great writer.

its been too long since the last submission! When is the next chapter due Bambi? Can hardly wait!