All Comments on 'An Unexpected Shift Ch. 01'

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Rad'lRad'labout 19 years ago
Great start

Great start - please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow

MORE, MORE!!!!!

glynndahglynndahabout 17 years ago
Great characters

I particularily liked how your female character was so sure she was in charge of things, but wasn't at all. Good start. I'm looking forward to the continuation of their encounter.

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