All Comments on 'The Truest Revenge Ch. 01'

payback revenge is always sweeter. TK U MLJ LV NV

Very well done, it flowed together nicely

There were a few errors but were not glaring. Liked the concept. Would have preferred to have the main character stewing a bit, maybe even fantasizing about how he'd get his revenge. But otherwise it's a good first chapter.

For the read.

they all shall be free. TK U MLJ LV NV

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