by KillerWithWords
n/t
they all shall be free. TK U MLJ LV NV
For the read.
There were a few errors but were not glaring. Liked the concept. Would have preferred to have the main character stewing a bit, maybe even fantasizing about how he'd get his revenge. But otherwise it's a good first chapter.
Very well done, it flowed together nicely
payback revenge is always sweeter. TK U MLJ LV NV