All Comments on 'And Just Like That...'

. . . story of real life. Is there going to be more? I really hope so otherwise why this as well as it has been written.

Woe to all impotent men do not get married,have a fertility count first before you decide to tie the knot. Perhaps marry a prostitute,you get all the skill and experience rolled in one.

This sounds like my parents...tried for years no kids adopt me and a few months later BaM! 3 kids in a row. Good job! Keep it up.

Nonsense. Ever heard of IVF? It works most of the time you don't have to go around fucking someone else to get pregnant. Stupid story about stupid people.

Someone wrote real life they must be quite young or retarded this has nothing to do with real life, the characters and author are retards.

Or why all the Trolling?! There was only husband/wife sex, wasn't there?

Not everyday dialog, but I've known people like this and it rings true. I laughed out loud at least once. I definitely want to check out your other stories.

Thank you.

I have no idea what's with the naysayers. Perhaps we can chalk it up to them ingesting bad drugs in their youth.

I certainly enjoyed the story. It's a realistic look at what a couple might say and do when they're truly in love and wanting to conceive.

Reality check: people are allowed to have opinions. If you can't stand people stating those opinions, you have no business being on the internet.

A lot of different emotions in this one. Funny, erotic and a happy ending.

Just a very good story, thanks.

Loving, fun, well-written. I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks, ohio

What a wonderful and endearing couple. I fell in love with both! HUH!

and a sweet tale despite the fact that the story about the thousand souls drowning is anything but "cheesy".

Yeah, cheesy, but a kind of story we don't see much of anymore. This IS a Loving Wife!

it is indeed a sweet story. Love it.

AND WELL WRITTEN... IT EXPLORES NOT SO MUCH THE EROTIC SIDE OF MARRIAGE; AS THE SENSUAL COMMUNICATIVE DEEP WELL OF TRUST TO THE OPENNESS OF THOUGHT (CAUSES ME TO REFLECT ON VOLTAIRE'S "CANDIDE"). i'M IN LOVE WITH sIR eDMUND'S CHARACTER - AND BELIEVE THEM TO MAKE GREAT PARENTS (AS SO OFTEN WE FIND GREAT LOVERS ARE NOT PREPARED TO BE EVEN GOOD PARENTS).

That is not unusual. Something about adopting a baby causes a women to get pregnant.

that idiot needs a higher dosage of meds to 'get right.'

Great loving wife story.

believable and well-written - but the nding was just so sudden that it was almost as if you'd suddenly changed your mind about where you were going with it and closed it down.

...and three months later, she's pregnant.

Would be so nice. Doesn't happen like that though. Nice fantasy.

Good story.

like the feral female, when one ovulates the pack follows...when a newborn is put in the mix the animal instinct assumes control. TK U MLJ LV NV

Your characters are well developed and likable given the brevity of the piece. Enjoyed the upleat feeling and plausibility. Good job!

A married 50ish grandmother and college writing instructtor who was viewed by all her female students age 18 to 55 as oh so refined used to beg me to rinate of her clitoris. She would call me into bathroom of our adulterous love nest above truck repair shop where she would be sitting naked on toilet, her fingers spreading her vagina and exposing her pearl. Her right index finger tapping her bud she would moan right here honey, please pee on me.

Standing there wearing only t-shirt I would just shake my head...just could not do it nor did I want to do it. Was revolted by thought

So she began demanding yo operate the hose when I urinated...talk about lousy aim as she seemed to think wiggling it back and forth was method to be used.

Little by little her need to be degraded wore on me...insisted I call her whore and slut during her orgasms-mind you that really made her lose control...then the pull her hair take that bitch facials

End came when she was in great hurry to put on panties after I ejaculated my second load in her-hadn't noticed before but had realization she always did that. Turned out she was capturing my seed in her panties and leaving them for husband to pick up as she changed in front of him

He loved pressing them to face

Met her one last time but during lead up to sex I ripped them off of her badly tearing them...told her he would have to go to source that night

Never met with her again

That's a nice change of pace. I could enjoy more stories like that.

But golden showers are a bit too much.

The pregnancy/adoption thing can be real. Our best friends had a boy, wanted another child, years and nothing. Started to adopt a baby from China. Had videos of the baby. My wife was going to go with the prospective mother to China to get baby. Few days before leaving baby died.

One month later the prospective mom was pregnant.

Liked it except the piss in on thing.

Well the pee thing threw me but otherwise an enjoyable story.