by Enidbrighton
At this point, belongs in the Incest Category . . . Unclear what the point of this story is. Janice is the Devil incarnate or something?
you just won bronze, silver and gold in the moron olympics.
Despite whatever negative comments you got so far, I liked it very much. It may be grammatically incorrect and in the wrong category. Those are only minor faults in what is a promising setup. I look forward to the next installment.
Ignore the critics, I enjoyed your story over all, and I'd like to see you develop it further.
What a heap of SHITE !!!!!!!!
You’re SERIOUSLY SICK in the head !!!