by Enidbrighton
What a heap of SHITE !!!!!!!!
You’re SERIOUSLY SICK in the head !!!
Ignore the critics, I enjoyed your story over all, and I'd like to see you develop it further.
Despite whatever negative comments you got so far, I liked it very much. It may be grammatically incorrect and in the wrong category. Those are only minor faults in what is a promising setup. I look forward to the next installment.
you just won bronze, silver and gold in the moron olympics.
At this point, belongs in the Incest Category . . . Unclear what the point of this story is. Janice is the Devil incarnate or something?