All Comments on 'Anniversary Surprise'

I was completely immersed in this story right up to the point where the main character starts fooling around with the guys in the truck. It was a realistic and plausible story up to that point. If it had been established that the main characters had an open marriage, then it would have made sense on some level. But even if that had been established, having the wife fuck a complete stranger in broad daylight, in front of a crowded restaurant, instantly changed the feel of the story.

Then, when you added the "you" perspective of narration, I was completely disappointed. If you were to rewrite this story from a first-person perspective, remove the scene with the two guys in the parking lot, and extend the threesome scene to add a little more detail, this story would merit five stars.