All Comments on 'Another Profile, Another Older Man'

by natalie89

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1Browneyedguy1Browneyedguyover 10 years ago
Fool around again, please.

WOW another sexy story ... very nice

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 10 years ago
Good enough as a short story.

We know nothing about either of the characters. Write some more please. You could expand the story.

natalie89natalie89over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks both of you for your comments!

1BrownEyedGuy, it means a lot that you've commented on more than one story and I appreciate your support. It makes me want to write more! :)

And Mitch, I appreciate your feedback a lot. This is the third story with this narrator and they all give slightly more information, so if you're interested in her you can read a bit more. However, I'm not very experienced with the first person and I find narration and dialogue really wobbly (???). So, I'll do my best to get better. Thanks for your help! :)

NewYorkeroticNewYorkeroticover 10 years ago
Really just a number?

Is there any old that is too old for your narrator. . .or you?

oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsover 1 year ago

Your writing is very evocative and leaves me wanting more. I wish it wasn't so long since you posted. I love your thing for older men. If you get this notice, please consider writing more... and maybe even a longer story! Just something about your stories is always hot! Thank you!

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