by natalie89
We know nothing about either of the characters. Write some more please. You could expand the story.
Thanks both of you for your comments!
1BrownEyedGuy, it means a lot that you've commented on more than one story and I appreciate your support. It makes me want to write more! :)
And Mitch, I appreciate your feedback a lot. This is the third story with this narrator and they all give slightly more information, so if you're interested in her you can read a bit more. However, I'm not very experienced with the first person and I find narration and dialogue really wobbly (???). So, I'll do my best to get better. Thanks for your help! :)
Is there any old that is too old for your narrator. . .or you?
Your writing is very evocative and leaves me wanting more. I wish it wasn't so long since you posted. I love your thing for older men. If you get this notice, please consider writing more... and maybe even a longer story! Just something about your stories is always hot! Thank you!