by Sailor1
The chapters get better and better. Readers have given 100% ratings for previous chapters, so I'm surprised no one commented on this one. While it contains descriptions of sex, it's a story on a higher level than most erotic stories. Had sex been left out, or toned down (but why in a honeymoon story would you do that?), it would still have been a good story about the relationship between a man and a woman.
So far, from what I've read, I think the plot would make a good movie.