All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 28'

You wrote another fabulous chapter in this series. I like how you introduced to Grace back into the story and developed her character with Veronica. I also like how you introduced the Rev. Gracie into the story. I like how she was able to read Veronica very quickly and be able to tell Veronica things that she saw about her and her dominant side. Can't hardly wait to see what how you develop the character of Gracie with the family.

hope that we don,t have to wait so long for the next ch. love this story, thanks

Dragging just a little, and I think it needed a little more erotic sex, But none the less a very good chapter. Thanks.......Rich

I cant wait for the wedding to to take place. On A personal note would prefer more stocking situations

So ready for something dramatic.