All Comments on 'Aphrodisia Ch. 07'

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C_frommnC_frommnalmost 14 years ago
Very Good

Now for the Gold and New Housing and School for the Boys.

A New Bedroom for Jamie and the Girl's?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Elisha

Great chapter! Elisha sure joined up quickly. I really look forward to seeing how she continues to interact with the others. How will they all deal with the trouble on the way? I can wait for it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Sweet!

Im glad these are finally coming back out again...I find myself reading these stories now more for the actual plot than for them to be loaded with sex. I want to know how many other gods Jamie is going to free. All the demons out there and how hes going to capture/kill them. I really hope to see like 15 more chapters developing the story and finishing it in good fashion. Thank you for the good reads so far.

Albert_80Albert_80almost 14 years ago
Excellent

After joining the site this is one of the first stories that i started to read and am really glad that it is back and better than ever.

I am really excited to see where the story goes and what happens.

Keep up the excellent work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great

I cant wait for more Please keep them cumming

hckfhckfalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

I love the story and the characters.

I can't wait to see how the demons and Athena will take part in the story or what Allison planned for Jamie and the girls.

Keep writing, I love it ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Spectacular writing. Truly terrific, and I'm not talking about the topic, I mean that your writing itself is superb. It takes an immense amount of skill to get me interested in a story, but you have succeeded. I eagerly await the next chapter :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Outstanding

Very good writing, keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Excellent

Please keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great work, but we need more!

First off, you've done excellent with this story. It's actually one of my favorites on this whole site.

We must have more though. Now that you've introduced the antagonist, none of us can wait until the time when we can read about how Jamie fights it. Will he get a gift from Athena to help him fight this evil? Perhaps a special weapon? Or maybe the goddess of war (strategic war) will give him some extra power or ability specifically to defeat these demons?

Whichever way you decide to take this, I can't wait to get more of this story, so get it on here already! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another fan

I am enjoying your story very much. The dark side adds a depth to the plot that many stories lack. My personal preference is for the good to ultimately overcome the evil and I hope your story ends happily after some unexpected twists.

Looking forward to the next installment.

THANK YOU

j1969j1969over 13 years ago
Don't Stop!

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
beautiful

beautiful story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Stuff

The grammar is getting much better, but don't slack on editing...and the story...IS FUCKING AWESOME! Who da man!? You da man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

LOVED THE STORY!!!! but it has been like 8 months since you posted last D:

NEW CHAPTER PLEASE

darksidrdarksidrover 13 years ago
Fantastic

I just love this story . when are you gonna submit the next chapter its been so long :(

TorChaTorChaover 13 years ago
More When???

You need to Wright More !!!

When is the next Chapter Due out??

MystiesMystiesabout 13 years ago
amazing story

thank you for deciding to write for

an audience, fantastic read! i

wonder if raven will pop up next chapter

bedurzan123bedurzan123about 13 years ago

WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE?

Firmhands5Firmhands5about 13 years ago
Twists and Turns

Enjoyable. But all our needs to be fed by your magic - let us know when you finish more.

I realize you only have so much time, but please, don't keep us hanging. I have enjoyed the progress of Jamie and his women - now more of the direction is being layed - so convoluted - hopefully you will keep the direction in your mind.

Spuds193Spuds193about 13 years ago
MORE SOON I HOPE

I liked alot I hope to see more soon THANK YOU

rjw69877rjw69877almost 13 years ago
Aphrosdisia

This is what bothers me about the longer stories. You get bored with the story, tired of writing or you just don't know how to finish up a story. and you end up wasting our time !!! It's been a year.

chaser73065chaser73065over 11 years ago
Awesome

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great

Really enjoying this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
seriously missing more

Please, I have read all, including chapter 8 and I want to read much more! I love all your stories but this one really has my interest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just write more

I'd like more.

HectorsHouseHectorsHousealmost 8 years ago
More

Please more of this story, brilliant plot and very well written

taco1085taco1085about 7 years ago
omg

love your story, so well written and the meaning of got wood, i have not laughed so hard in a long time...... still laughing thinking about it. thank you....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I'm curious

Will you be writing more stories I've read them all and I want more this, and more missing dragon please write more you are an amazing writer and these are the best stories I've read on this website.

L0st_S0ulL0st_S0ulover 2 years ago

Every time I find an amazing series i find out its incomplete and it's been at least a couple years since the last entry.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

FISHINGDUDEFISHINGDUDEalmost 2 years ago

For your 1ST series Great Work!

tinfoilhattinfoilhatalmost 2 years ago

More content...less page after page sex.

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