All Comments on 'Aphrodisia Ch. 08'

I'm enraptured with this story and I wish with all my heart for it to be continued. I couldn't put it down.

Keep it coming! I also enjoy your other works but NO reason to abandon this.You have lots of room to grow this one. Please Continue

i first read this story a couple years ago, and it was an instant favorite. ive reread it a few times, and i keep hoping to find more, but its been 2 years since you last posted this chapter,

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post something new!!!!

I can honestly say that this is my favourite storyline on this whole site, great characters, splendid plot and amazing chemistry. If this were published work you'd have a very willing buyer, I think this storyline can become great and truly hope you continue this story on. So please, give us more!!!! :)

If I could give you a medal for fantastic writing then I would, but since this site has no "give medal" button I shall just say congratulations on another fantastic chapter:)

Please continue on with this story. I'm practically drooling for more of this saga - as that what it truly is. It is a really great tale and should correctly and with respect. Respect for your readership but also respect for this magnificient story!!!

have been waiting for an up date.Is the best of you work out of them all please work on this story more

MOOORE!!!!!!!!

This story was addicting and very hard to stop reading! There too many loose ends! I, no, we will keep checking back for more.

I love the story but WHY NO MORE? It's a special story. It draws you into the story. I can't figure why there is no more. This is a story that has great flow to it. Plus this story, this series I've given the most stars in all of the stories that I've read. I've read over 300 stories and countless series. I WANT MORE STORY!!!!!!

I really do wish you would continue I miss it.

I both love and hate cliff hangers, especially the many you included in this story. Please continue it, so I may reach intellectual fulfillment. Plus, this story is freaking awesome!

This series is one of the best I've ever read. If you made a book I would actually pay money for it. Please keep writing!

I love these stories, please write more! Like someone said, if these were made into a fully fledged novel, I would totally buy it and read the b'jesus out of it

write more!!!!!!! all your series; please write more!

Best series ive read in quite some time, im elated to have found it. Please write more =)

Please add to it, best story i have read in a wile........your a great story teller...

Posted 5/2011 but I would like more chapters of Aphrodisia.

Please consider writing more.

I well understand that life or fate moves us in ways that we don't anticipate, but I would like to read more of this story ... it's not finished yet.

please write more

this story kicks ass (just like athena). please write more

Just finished reading this, and I loved every minute of it. You are an amazing writer and I sincerely hope you get back to writing this beatific epic.

wow, i red this and the missing dragon, both are really awesome and i really want to continue reading till the end to see what happens, really hope you will have time and patience to finish both stories. best of wishes

This series was one of the best on this site. Please keep up the great work

I've been reading a lot of stories on this creative site, and yours is amasing.

And, it seems that i'm not alone to find it awsome.

It would be great to add another chapter to this great story.

Thanks for the fantasy, keep writing...

I've been read literotica a long time and this story is amazing your a very talented writer. Keep up the great work and don't worrie about the time it just makes us want it more :p

I love this series. I'd like more of it. As to your writings, I'd like more also. Thank you. I've reread this series several times now and I still love it.

I can only agree with the compliments and requests for more... :) - Great work please keep writing :) :)

Got to the end of this chapter. Found out there were no more. Cried.

Please keep this series going! And What did Allison tell him that Athena didn't want him to know!

When he bent the succubus over and licked her pussy and asshole, 5 stars. Please continue this series. It's been far too long of a wait. You are a brilliant writer.

Hope to read more of this series! Great Work!

when will see more of this ? I love reading it . Please write more i have already read this 10 or 12 times hoping for more

this is a nice series and I hope to see it continue.

I want more of this series. Thank you.

Now we know. Genie bottles from hell.

This is great, couldn't put it down from start to finish (unless life interrupted).

Please continue, I have totally enjoyed all of your work that I have read so far.

When's the next one coming out

This series is great I can't wait for more. Please continue writing till chapter 20 at least 😀

Great series, can't wait for the next chapter :)

I hope you come back and finish the story

Please continue this story i would really like to know what happens next.

I hope you come back and finish this story

please come back and continue this story.

it's the best of your lot.

It's been a long time since you posted this one, but I can only hope you decide to revisit this story line. It's been very entertaining.

Want more chapters.

Please finish! There is still so much that I want to know. When Jason buys the mansion does he move the kids in with him? What happened to the gods, and what powers do the girls get? What happens to the succumbs? What other gods does Jason free on his travels?

This is a great story. I wish it would be continue.

Thanks for writing what you have.

Pleas post more of this story. This is a really fun series

Rightup till i finnished chapter 8 and realized its dead before it got going, thx for letting us down.

Now it needs to be finished. Seriously dude, it seems the story is just barely begun. I personally like what you've written so far, and excuse me for impugning your "artistic integrity" but you left people hanging here for quite some time, pick up the pen, fire up the word processor and lets go!

This series is fantastic, it such a shame it never going to be finshed

This has to be my favorite story on lit, please comment if you have no intention of continuing it. I apologize if I've missed a previous post regarding it, but I checked the previous posts and didn't see anything. The writing on this story is exemplary, the love scenes among the most erotic I've read, licking the cum off the sheets was inspired. To kill off these characters at this point in the story is truly a shame, my wish is that I had enough talent to do them justice, I would love to be able to pick up where you've left off. Unfortunately, my skills as a reader far surpass my skill as a writer. I really wanted to see what powers the girls developed, along with how many demons and gods Jamie could get to fall in love with him. Seemed like Athena was heading that way already.

The story isn't dead, but nor is it particularly alive right now either. It's a bit un-dead, if anything. This was the first story I wrote up on the site, and although I still like the concept it's not exactly up to my own standards right now. I'm thinking about possibly going back through it all one day and doing a proper edit whilst fixing a few story issues I see now. So yeah, not saying it'll be never, but for now I'm working on other stuff and leaving this up for its fans. ^_^

I've found this to be one of my favorite stories on here, and would love to see you add more to it, I do my best but still found myself rushing through the chapters as it was more exciting than many I have read. I hope you can see fit to bring your talent back and finish tji2s with many more chapters, I have seen some errors in it but it takes nothing away from the stoy line or the enjoyment I find in reading it. Thank you gor a enjoyanle read.

Again, you have done a great job with another entertaining story for us all to enjoy. I look forward to more chapters to come.

Thanks, again, for your efforts for us all.

I would love for you to pick this story back up. I have thoroughly enjoyed it and it would be a shame to see it unfinished.

You seriously need to continue this story! I keep coming back at least twice a year hoping to see a new chapter and having to just reread all the old chapters to get my fix

Hi @Lien_Geller, very much enjoyed reading this story so far, and would love to see more. I suspect you may think that you've written yourself into a corner - making Jamie and the girls responsible for defetating the powers of ultimate evil, while keeping true to this being erotic fiction with lots of hot sex, and not turning into a supernatural thriller. Having Jamie show love and compassion to the succubus was a smart move, maybe more along those lines? However it's a fine line to tread, the whole 'love conquers evil' can come across as very corny if not done well.

After the first couple of chapters I had expected Jamie to accept his destiny and go out into the world and spread love using his newly found mind-reading abilities, much like Michael Landon in that old TV show 'Highway to Heaven' (jeez I'm old). Keeping the story so tightly focused on the three ladies and introducing the 'conquering evil' element may have been a wrong turn. If you're planning on revisiting the story for a rewrite maybe that's something you could look at?

Anyway, just my 2c. You did well, I read the whole series (so far!) in a couple of hours, came three times after already having blown my load on a different story beforehand. Keen to see more.

I'm really enjoying this story. The sex is scorching hot, and I'm impressed by the variety in the characters as well as the scenes themselves. Keep it up! This story really needs more attention glad I picked it up.

Are you ever going to come back to this story and finish it?????

Hope someday you come back to finish this one.

I would love to read more it is a great story so far it has a great plot thinks

Please..., Please..., PLEASE !!! Come back to this and add more chapters. This has been an awesome read and I am salivating for more. John T

You can't just leave the storie hang like you have, please finish it........

Fkn hate unfinished stories. What's your excuse putz?

Please finish the story! I need to know what happens to Jamie and the gals!

You are an excellent writer, and you enrapture your audience and then leave us hanging for 6 years. Are you George RR Martin?

Now that I'm at this point, I really want to read more of this please make it fast and good like the way our boy Jamie screw those lovely ladies

I gotta say out of the few hundred stories I have read on here I would like to see more of it in the near future.

Good work, keep it up.

I appreciate all the hard work you put into this story was wondering if at any point you may finish it as would like to know what happens to the Master of the succubus and Jamie and the girls and also with Athenaand Allison

Great Story

I, also, would like more of Aphrodisia, but not at the expense of the story. Like the others, I have read and re-read this series hoping for more. I also have enjoyed the Missing Dragon series and hope for more.

For firezenukes, George R.R. Martin has been writing for 3-4 decades, Lien is not that bad.

Retired U.S.M.C. GySgt

I doubt this willnever be continued. But it was a blast while it lasted, very VERY good stuff !

Good story and characters. Please continue.

I came back to re read this while waiting for more from The Missing Dragon. It is still an awesome story and I wish you could make some time to continue it. I am sure that all your readers and fans would relish it. Thanks USMCTazman

This is one of my favourite stories on this site and I really want to read more. The fact that it actually has a plot is a bonus too!

Please continue

You're now one of my favorite authors. Please continue.

Your writting is great. I've enjoyed all your series so far. I'm sure there are plenty of people that would love to continue to read your stories. Please continue.

A little feedback on my thoughts on the story. I think the extra mind power stuff could be toned back. Like the mental 'clean up' after they get out of the van. I get that you said you moved away from the mind control to more scifi but I did like that aspect of the storyline. You know spreading the love connection around as payment for the gifts.

But it's your story, take it where you want. I'll be reading it.

You write very well and keep me interested in the story line. I really hope you choose to keep going with this. I really hate getting multiple chapters into a story and find that it is dead without a conclusion.

I'd like to see more of this story. Try not to place too much importance on the ratings. I've noticed that some categories have consistently higher average ratings than others when the writing quality was roughly the same. I admire those who have posted stories because I can read, but I'm not a good writer. Just do your thing and write. Thank you for the series.

If this your 1st story,, wonderful!! And looking forward to Ch6 of Missing Dradons!!! You are an Incedible Writter!! don't get a big head

I am enjoying your other works. Hope to see you actually publish some erotic novels and continue your other works but I hope that you can maintain your sanity juggling your normal working like and writing. Best wishes and hope to see more of everything.

Just wanted to say thanks, and I hope you can get back to writing again soon. Great stories, awesome writing, have enjoyed all your work.

I very much enjoy this type adult fantasy, when may we see ch9 and +++

I was thinking he still had that glass bottle from the cellar and could have captured the succubus or the demonic pupper (and trained him and he would have been called Pootles and he would have been a good boy and only eaten cats and traffic wardens!).

This aphrodisia series started well, but turned into 98% sex. Not near as good as the dragon or temple series. 3 stars, sorry

Like the last commenter stated, this is about 95% sex, but erotica is much more than just sex. This started out really well, however it is basically now a fuck fest, which is quite frankly becoming boring and I was skipping huge chunks to get back to the story. Hopefully you can get back on track and please try to remember that sometimes less is more. On a final note, what happened to his VW so that they had to get a taxi?

I'm thoroughly enjoying this series, don't give up on it!

The story was getting better and better. Was interested in his being taught to take care of himself. New female Athena and succubus, why did you stop. Maybe you could interest a different author to continue the story.

please come back I love this it is great Jamie is a demi-god now and I wish i could have some of his powers

please go on with the story, i would love to see a relationship with the succubus to be established as well :)

once you get by the grammar changes between countries such things as stood instead of standing and sat instead of sitting just getting picky in my old age

one of the best series I have read anywhere it's extremely interesting and the sex scenes are fantastic. please continue writing this series I love it.

I just found your Aphrodisia series... wish you had continued.

My usual litmus test for stories on this website (not just yours) is whether or not the plot holds up without the sex. It definitely does here (although I thought the ending was a little weak).

Having said that, in this case the sex actually overwhelmed the story. There were a couple of times where I found myself skimming past the sex parts to get back to the plot.

Very good story, but every story, bad or good, needs an ending. Till you can't end it I can't name you a good writer. However I gave all 5 stars, but they are not for you as a writer.

Thank you so much for taking the time to write Aphrodisia! I judge a good story by how hard it is for me to leave it and go do something else, this story had me sitting in my chair for hours! I loved the characters and the plot and the description of the sex scenes was great!

I just discovered your Aphrodisia series. This is really a fantastic story and I wish you would write more chapters. There are so many paths to follow. Please pick it back up and continue!

Surprise, surprise. Yet another unfinished story on Literotica. Do any of them ever get finished?

i really do hope for more.