by Lien_Geller
Well that was a waste. Unfinished over a decade later.
I wish Literotica would grow a pair and delete anything that’s incomplete a year after the last chapter.
You entitled crybabies kill me. Complaining about FREE stories again that you DON'T pay for not being complete. To the author, thank you for writing this and all your other stories and all the hard work like editing that those crybabies never think about. And also for sharing said stories with us which you kindly do for FREE. So again my humble thanks to you and keep up the great work. 5 stars for entire series.
Good stuff, only sad that the author lost inspiration or time to continue what was several great story lines
The story is enjoyable, even though it's not up to the standard of the author's later work, The Missing Dragon. Shows how much he's improved, and the writing seems to be improving as the story progresses.
Ouch!
Where's the next chapter?
Still, if it's a choice between more of Aphrodisia and more of The Missing Dragon, I'll go with The Missing Dragon, although newer chapters of Aphrodisia could be expected to also benefit from Lien_Geller's greater mastery of the art.
He says this chapter was late, yet I've been waiting 10 years for chapter 9...
I am enjoying this read immensely and can hardly waiting to see the next chapters. Please keep it flowing.
I want to read more to see what happens with our foursome. I’ll definitely will want to read this again.
Yeah, sadly I think the Lien Geller as stopped writing here on Literotice or perhaps something happened in real life that prevents him to post his work.
But for sure, he is greatly missed.
is that it or are you going to write more of this story? i really love it
Would love to read more on this. Very very interesting as well as erotic. I hope you don't abandon it and continue on after you finish the rewrite of TMD.
10 years since an update. Very sad to walk away from so much work and no conclusion.
Sadly, nothing since 2012 from this author. Would have loved to have seen this story continue.
Great story I've read this a few times now and I keep hoping for it to be continued. Any takers if the author is unable to continue with both of the story's.
This is one of those rare stories that's both excellently penned, and horribly short. While I felt there was almost too much sex and it got in the way of the overarching narrative being spun, the worst part was simply coming to the end and seeing that it has been years since the author was active here.
Truly a rare story. Well worth the time to read even if you know it ends unfinished.
The story you've created here is great, and I am a little saddened that I've reached the end. I'm completely invested, and hope you revive the story somewhere down the road thank you for the wonderful introduction to your world.
As usual, another unfinished story. Since it was last added to in 2011, it more in likely to never be finished. This is a major problem with this site, unfinished stories. I bet in the Erotic Horror and Nonhuman sections that over 80 to 90% of the stories are unfinished, As usual the reader is left hanging because the writer does cnor finish the story.
You probably will not post the last comment because it is a negative comment about unfished stories.
Really hate as I make my way through stories, that I find ones like this. So much promise left to rot. This could have been a truly wicked long story. Plenty of room to expand, but I guess the creators can lose interest
Have to agree w\ zephyrwhirl from a month ago. Last story is a walk away finish from 2011? MAAaaaaaan. People BORN in 2011 are already old enough to get those funny feelings when reading this. I see updates by the Author in 2022, PLEASE come back and finish up on this one.
It's really too bad this author stopped writing right when this story was getting good.
Ummm... 12 years since this one was put out, 6 years since your latest posting, and a year since your last update on your profile. I can only assume you've decided not to post here anymore, which based on the issues with someone stealing your work, I can understand, but it would be nice if you'd say that's the case. I have greatly enjoyed reading your works and hate that some idiot has caused you to stop posting here, at least to finish what you've started anyway. I wish you well, and will keep you as a favorite author in case you post again.
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I absolutely live this story! I'd love to rate it higher than a 5. I wish that you'd continue it. The plot is enthralling. The sex portions are nice too. Please pick it back up!
Enjoying. Like the fantastic elements. Characters kind of jump into feelings really quickly but it's all good fun.
Great story. The succubus should have had it in the arse, would have been fitting
Please come back it was just getting Juicy. 2024 comeback PLEASE!!! 😭😭
Really fun series. I'd be lying if I said I skipped the smut, but the characters are likeable and the story interesting on their own.
I wish the author would continue his series on another channel to monetise or protect his work better. I'd even be happy with an epilogue chapter as so many questions are unanswered:
* how do they secure the gold legally?
* will Jamie fuck every single woman he runs into (Athena and Alison have escaped instant sex but clues are it's on the horizon)
* how big will his pantheon grow (3 girls, 2 goddesses and 1 succubus is enough for me, but I'm no sex demigod)
* how will the conflict with the demons pan out - they know about him, clues to combat training...
I guess the question is if subsequent books were self published on kindle unlimited, how many readers here would buy them?