All Comments on 'Aphrodisia Ch. 08'

I really like it. I think the direction you have started to take is very intereasting and I like the fact that you are keeping the characters actions in keeping with their established modus. ie. The only way that Jamie would have ever really considered to deal with the succubus is with love because for the moment thats what he is. I also think it will be intereasting to see his relationships with other gods, like Athena, develope over time as he encounters them, and how Allison will take those relations.

i remember reading this series a long time ago when i first ran across this site and loved it very much i would love to see what happens next.

please right more this is one of the best

This entire series is one of the most interesting ones on literotica. I was so glad that the exact day I checked to see if there was a new chapter was the day that a new one was added. Thanks you for writing and continuing the series, and I can't wait for the next part.

Just finished reading the whole story. Fantastic work, thank you for sharing it.

This is a really great series and will get you many fans...I was worried that you gave up on it.

So glad you're continuing this - hopefully we'll get to see the next chapter soon, real life permitting!

Aphrodisia is right up there for me as one of the best series on this site and I have to keep checking your page for new posts... it's been a long year!! ;)

Loved this chapter as much as I have your others. Can't wait to see the next chapter in this series and the others that you're working on as well.

Just one concern though... it seems as though you may be setting up for Athena as another of Jamie's partners. I hope you don't. To keep true to her mythological character, she is a virgin and I hope you don't change it. Won't hate your writing if you do, but I like keeping true to the myths and Athena is my personal favorite in the entire pantheon.

I also thought you had given up on this series. Glad you haven't. Other than the long intermission, I only have one complaint. Your use of stood instead of standing.

This series is brilliant, keep it up and really loving the story. can't wait to see where it goes

I have had a chance to read a lot of different stories on Literotica and this is definitely one of my favorites so far and I have had the misfortune of reading a lot of great stories that never got finished so the fact that you are still writing this is great! keep up the fantastic work and write more soon!

Just found this series. Fun read.

Minor detail- cellar was left uncovered.

Looking forward to more!

It is good to see that you're still actively writing. It seems many of the great stories on here get left unfinished, and I had worried that Aphrodisia (and The Defiled Temple) may never get completed. You being back dismisses those fears.

It is good to see your story evolve as you see how characters develop. It is much less of a mind-control (as the first chapter started off as), and more of a mutual, sci-fi/fantasy element to it. Keep up the great writing!

Like so many others, I had feared that you had given up on this great series, but I am very happy to see that you haven't.

The new chapter is again a very good and interesting read and I like where you are going by introducing some challenges to Jamie apart from keeping his women happy.

I've loved this story and have been waiting ages for the new chapter. So glad you're still writing and am eagerly awaiting more!

Wonderful story, wonderfully told. Please keep going.

I, for one, am glad you didn't go for a serious mind-control angle. I'm enjoying this story much more this way.

Keep them coming :)

Keep the good work up man!! It is a great story series and well we are all practically waiting for the next. Hope you will get some time to write it down soon!!

Your story is starting to veer away too much from the original beginning. The storyline is getting away from you and is not as enjoyable to read.

Keep at it dude, its great!

keep up the writing the new ideas and characters in the plot are getting better every chapter

I love this series !

Keep writing please!!!!!! This story is to good to stop!

KEEP THEM COMING!! :)

I am loving this story, gimme more!!!!

Absolutely brilliant!!

I didnt think there would be another part, so glad to see i was wrong!

This is the best series on here, it's the only one I check for regularly, I think it is amazing, and your characters are great and really well written.

Can't wait for part 9...!!!!

just amazing keep it up looking foward to the next chapter

I love this story

This story's brilliant - I've greatly enjoyed reading through it so far. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!

hell YES!! great great story

Thank you loved reading!

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad to have finally found a well written fantasy tale after so long. Keep up the good work.

I've been hitting this story off an on for several months now and I can say that I cannot wait for it to continue. Sex aside, it is a very good story with a fascinating plot, sex included just makes it that much hotter. Can't wait to see more.

just want to say i love your story.

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

cant wait for more of this.and the missing dragon too... keep up the good work

I AM ALSO LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING MORE OF THIS TALE ITIS VERRY GOOD AND HARD TO STOP READING ONCE STARTED...THANK YOU FOR YOUR WRIGHTING (-:

Please, Please , Please keep writing this story, it has fantasy, sex, love , passion, myth and adventure all rolled into one saga. I love it and am sharing it with others. thank you for the experience,

By the way, if you don't write any more, I'll just have to sic Athena onto you!

Please keep up with this story ! It is a wonderful story and I can't wait for more !

this has got to be one of the best stories i have read on here keep up the good work

really liked this one as it seems to move the story forward instead on focusing only on the sex.

keep it up. id like to read more story

nothing draws attention to a hole full of gold like a wrecked police car

Your writings are out of this world plz continue

thnx for posting... i was thinking u let go... if u dnt mind posting faster... love ur story... want to see where it leads... awesum work!

Loving this whole series, look forward to seeing more- Cheers!

Wow. Awesome.

I really enjoyed what there was of this. Sorry it wasn't finished. I really want to know where things would have gone.

really good please continue one of the best ive read

Excellent story line with right mix of sex at the right times. Please continue man, hope you aren't facing any problems that is stopping you. And if you are then I sincerely hope they get over soon :-)

dude olease herry and get the next one done i love this story

Eagerly awaiting more from you in this series. Please do continue!

please do continue the series I love reading your stories

The continuation is fun to read. I hope there are/will be more. Good love feelings, good message. Thank you.

MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!

Okay . . . one word 27 times, lol. Please continue this series! I can't wait to see how the money is going to help things along. I can see it now, a nice HUGE house/mansion/estate (somewhere around Bradford on Avon maybe?) with the boys in the best public schools available, and good times all over!

I have never left a comment before, but this series is truly excellent!

More...

Please continue this series!

Don't break our hearts, post more please!!!!

More more more. More more more. More.

Lots more please, cus I am hooked

yea dude, your writing is fantastic. please keep writing, me and my girlfriend love reading your stories, this and the Orc one are our favourites out of the all the stories we've read so far (and that's a lot) so please keep the series going

i realy realy love ur storiey because in ur stories characters love each other n there is so much of emotion.i realy hope if u can continue this story.

I loved your story 'Aphrodisia' but it was to short! What happens to the characters, and what about that succubus? True she is a demon, but she wants to find love, will Jamie help her out? Maybe this is stuff for future chapters. Thanks for writing this story, now i will check to see if you have other stuff written.

The story is great, I hope you write another chapter soon.

Please More of the Chapters of this Story

Its been almost a full year since this chapter was posted and I would like to see it continue so are you ever going to consider writing more chapters or is this truly the end? If so Im really disappointed that Allison and Jamie never had a chance to have sex with each other.

This is a fantastic series, and it is one of my favourite on this site. I am actually finding myself skipping the long sex scenes to get on with the exciting adventure! I can't wait for the next chapter to come around!

Thanks for the story. Great writing. If you can find the time, please finish the story for us. Thank you, Sky.

Read all the other Aphrodisia chapters, and just finished this one. I love this story line, the plot, the sex, everything. I wish the series would continue.

i love both this series and the Missing Dragon series i would love got get my hands on more of both!!!

I wish there was more, keep writing so fantastically!

Just brilliant

Finish the story plz !!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing story! *_* I would love to see update (even though it seems to be abandoned), and some Jamie/Allison finally

I read all 8 chapters almost straight through. Probably the best story I've read on here. I hope you get a chance to continue the story a little while longer and finish it.

I've been waiting for a few months and now nothing is new! Even 'The Missing Dragon' isn't having a new chapter! Have an update of either this chapter or the missing dragon and itll be my christmas present, okay? Thx

i love your stories, this is one of my favorites. i hope there will be more i am really intriuged to see what happens next.

This is an entertaining story. I like the characters. I like the concept. I think it really got interesting with these last couple chapters in terms of the plot.

But I would like to see a better ratio between sex scenes and story/story progression. These characters don't go five minutes or more than a paragraph without having sex again. There needs to be a bit better pacing in that regard. Give us some more story and with sex scenes spaced further apart.

I'm interested in seeing how this develops.

Absolutely one of my favorites. I fell madly in love with all five women. PLEASE write more!

Like I have said seveal times before, you do great work, but I would like to ask a favor, PLEASE. Would you write just one more chapter in the next couple of weeks and if you have nothing else in it, would you just write two words: The End.

Then I could move on and would not be in this place where I a seeting with frustration and my love of your art is becoming burned through by my battling the unknown of when, what, who.

P L E A S E ! ! !

Totally Outstanding ... hope you write more chapters

Cal

its been too long and a new chapter is overdue ...

You have done wonderfully so far with these story! I do hope you get past the block and can continue some time. In the mean time I will check out TMD. Thank You!

I really think this is a fantastic story. It has some classic elements to it, but you have given them all a slight twist. I.E. the genie that's not a genie, the harem that's not a harem, etc. It makes for a great read, and I can't wait to see the next chapter, no matter how long it takes! Great job

Please be awesome and write another chapter quickly please

Some great stories on this site are left unfinished. Shame though.

Screw your other stories, write more of this!

This story is definitely my favorite. Its kinda tied with The Missing Dragon but my favorite nonetheless.

I am a big fan of sci-fi and the Greek gods so this is especially well received.

Can't wait for the next!

it seems i always fall for good stories that aren't finished yet. please put me out of my misery soon!

Please write the next chapter I'm hooked

I just finished reading the last chapter you have posted in this series, and you really must write more of it.

the plot and the humor with which you weave this story into existence makes it a truly fun read! please get back on this story, there are tons of ways it could develop and i really want to read further which way you'd take!

Im sure everyone who has read this story agrees that it is beautiful and addictive and wish they could get more i personnaly have read it 5 times and i need the next chapter please

Reading this story is as addictive as Jamie's cum. Simply reading it could turn a lesbian... well... maybe not straight, but at least bi!

Love the humor. Love that the characters have some real depth to them. Love the great plot and story line, and of course I love the sex, the hot sex, the tender sex, steamy sex, the animalistic sex that pounds like a freight train... And have I mentioned that I like the sex?

Please keep writing, keep posting, and keep the faith. There are too many great stories on this site that die a tragic unfinished death... Don't let this be another statistic.

Your stories are amazing!!!! It encompasses three of the things i like most: Reading, sex and fantasy! I love your work please write more!!!!

Just finished chapter 8 I simply got hooked on a good read couldn't "put it down" awesome story line and great character development. I cant wait till chapter nine is posted! I look forward to it!

This is an amazing read , love every minute of it. I just wish there were more chapters available 👍

Great story I hope to see more of it someday.

All of your current works are fantastic but unfinished. These are as good as any novel and are much more deserving of being finished than most. Keep on writing and know that your fans truly appreciate your works.