by Lovesqueeze
That was very hot and your writting skills made the story come alive. No pun intended.
Thanks
You write very well and your words are well written and erotic. I don't find many stories that get my interest anymore but you grabbed and held it hostage to the end. I look forward to reading more.
You have such an astounding way with words, that it kept my interest the entire time. The build-up was full of details about day to day life that most people would easily skip over and the act was erotic, sensual, and aesthitically pleasing. I could virtually see what was going on. I wanted to take the time to say thank you for such an amazingly well-written story.