All Comments on 'Armored Love Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

I absolutely love it. I just read all the chapters again and I like how you took the plot and rolled with it. Please keep it coming. You got a sista that is going to be checking everyday for the updates to this story.

PennLadyPennLadyover 14 years ago
Good...

...but moved awfully fast. One has to wonder why Bianca's parents had any children at all, if they're so narcissistic and selfish; I do kind of wish her dad had had more backbone, but Tony saved the day. :) I still think you could with a re-read, or an editor -- there were errors like "say" where you mean "stayed" and things like that; easy to miss when you edit your own work. But I like it and can't wait to meet Tony's mom.

pmpktypmpktyover 14 years ago
I like it

It did seem to go a little fast, but I liked it. Her mom is a huge bitch. I want to hear more about her and I want to see her stand up to her.

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
good

poor fucker.no sex.but am loving it.cant wait for them to make sweet love.lol.keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful!!!!

Loved it cant wait for next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
omg!

loved it...i cant wait to c how this plays out. keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loving it

Loving this story.

can't wait to see how antonio's mother react to bianca being black.

I want bianca to stand up to her bitch of a mother.

please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I've just re-read the story again

are you going to make all the baddies who have hurt bianca suffer, (including the stinky mum), and will tony still want to be with bianca when she tells him about not being able to have babies? oh i can't wait for the next chapter, hurry up will you!! lol, oh, and btw HAPPY NEW YEAR! ;D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
love it!

I really like everything about this story, except the characterization of the father as allowing the verbal abuse of his daughter simply for his own sexual gratification. Somehow, that did not come off convincingly. Other than that....HOT, HOT HOT!

Thanks for a fun read!

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