All Comments on 'Arousal'

by kandeedreames

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barbette_sgbarbette_sgalmost 11 years ago

I have to agree with Alpha_Marm...I love your story :)

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmalmost 12 years ago
Had this "old jade" smiling!!!

I found this on a lark just before going to sleep. Had to put it in favorites so I wouldn't lose it. Damn....damn ...damn!!!! This one made an "old jade" like me reflect on the freshness of it. I used to believe in love at first sight, but now things are all fucked up and nobody is really willing to extend themselves beyond the moment.

I like this story because ( like the song by Patrice Rushen) it reminds me of the magic love can have no matter how it comes at you.

Perhaps an important message here is that we all need to remember what a gift it is in the first place.

mrskelleymrskelleyover 12 years ago
Cute

I like thse love st first sight one shots!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well....

This story is really cliche, but I liked it.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

Love at first sight, though it may be scary but any relationship ur really taking a chance with your heart. always be carful but u dont want to miss out on the love of your life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
@ Thelovely1glo

You're right. I do believe in love at first sight also. I also think that it does take bravery to go with it. There have been a lot of people that have went the distance (one I know personally) with the person they fell for on sight.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Graceful

I love the love at first sight spin. This can and often does happen in real life, we just need to be truthful with ourselves when it happens, and go with the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
AWWWWW

If only that happened for real!

jwayne321jwayne321almost 14 years ago
wooh! that was hot!

Oh my...oh my. I love that love was found between such an opposite couple and nothing about the story was cheesy so I thank you for that. Now if you could do a series of stories just like this, I know you'll never be without fans. That was really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
wow

super hot! im hooked!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 14 years ago
wow

okay any hotter and the fire dept would so have to be called

honeybreehoneybreealmost 14 years ago
oh lala that was hot!!!!!

love the chemistry and the passion between the two characters, it is so nice to read a BBW story that is not stereotypical, this was awesome and romantic

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 14 years ago
nice...

the chemistry is there. well done. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
*****

Well written.

justboycrazyjustboycrazyalmost 17 years ago
Amazing!

Loved this story! Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great story

Only improvement i can think of is describing her body some more.

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