All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 02'

by rowan3

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hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904over 15 years ago
Good Job

I like the story line. Its a good story. Don't make us wait too long for the next one.

lonelyangel22lonelyangel22over 15 years ago
Amazing

Love this chapter. I'm so not liking Connors sister right now. Please don't wait to long to put up the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
i like it

but the editing mistakes make it really hard for me to read. when it first came out, i tried to read it but there were too many mistakes, but i did like what i had enough patience to read, which is why i came back to it today and i'm glad i did.

but, please, get an editor!

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
enjoyed it

i really liked the story.cant wait for you to finish it.

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
Is it sexual tension or do they really not like each other?

Alexa meet Conner, you know your boyfriends' brother in law. What can you say to that?

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Apparently sparksfly in more ways than one

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