All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 08'

that was a twist in the story i didn't see comin at all, i got so excited to see the title light up the new stories page, great stories and authors are few and far between for my taste, and u are surely are one of them, but man, do u have to stay away so long?! tho' it was an excellent read with intense characters, and a nice length, it still hasn't satiated my greedy need to have this story read over and over again!

knew something was up with connor.but alexa,i feel sorry for her.she needs good man,but can the good doctor be the one or connor who's thinking of two women.will he fuck them both ? like most blokes always do.can't wait for the next up date,please don't let us wait too long.cos its nearly xmas !!! lol

I want that break through when the shit hits the fan. I think Connor could be good for her. I think they really care about each other but are both afraid to say something because its going so fast. They think about each other constantly. So far the introduction of the Dr seems pretty pointless to me and seems to make the story a bit more complicated. From what I'm reading it seems as if we still have a long way to go and at this pace I will have to keep re-reading the story so I can remember what happened.

perfect mix of story lines and conner and alexa need each other

When will the next chapters me posted? or if they are completed please post.

Your plot and storyline are amazing. Keep it up, you're a great writer.

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

This was a great chapter! I'm eager for the next one, and finally see some secrets revealed!

Please please please continue with this story!! :D

So he's an agent? Now all this makes sense. More Please!!!!

oh man i like the twist. I hope you come back to the story it has been two months. keep up the good work can't wait to see what's next.

I have been glued to this story for a couple of days now-- I only have time to read when its slow at work and I thought i would have the opportunity to finish this series tonight---I was wrong because you haven't finished the story either! Please...please...please hurry up and finish writing this story.

wow, i didnt see the federal agent part coming...nice

I was getting a bit upset with the progress of this story. It seemed to be jumping all over the place with no real direction. It seemed to be only giving little bits and pieces and it was pissing me off. UNTIL I got here and I'm glad I stayed with your story. I like the fact that he is really a good guy and that Alexa will have someone real wanting her and not someone like that punk azz Marcus. Please please have her brothers wife get what's coming to her. The fact that she played a part in Alexa getting hurt is fucked up but I like the way you put it down. Keep up the good work gurl. The story is getting good and I can't wait until you finish it.

Cheers

This story is really confusing

I really like this story, in the beginning it was so hot... but chapt. 6 I think really through me. and if you have

to skip sections to follow it ( as 1 Anon commented on) that's not good. I love how you spun this tale. I only hope you continue this, I pace myself to read it, it's that good, your good. I just want you to show a split in dialogue between Alexa/ Connor and Janabelle/Gauge. you should had saved Alexa's friends romance as a seCond romance tale. I get what your doing, just remember to separate your characters better. const

constructive crtisicm... with a smile.

I knew it,I knew he worked with the law.. go David for busting the crazy chick and kicking her out but I'm sure is not over