All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 09'

I Sooo Love this story. Thank you for keeping at it even with me writting every other week "BEGGING" for updates. It was worth it. Keep up the good work. DLSimley761

You really need to update more often. It really is a GREAT story. So intricate. Thank u!! Can't wait for the next one.

I hope Bella means it and stays with Gauge this time though. And good thing Conner finally realized what Jenny really is. Just one thing, though, please if you can, get an editor. There are a few grammatical errors all over the place. But don't take that as a bad thing. Your story is great and I enjoy reading it. Please update soon!

i just know there is going to be massive shit hitting the fan when everything comes into the open and i cannot wait for it.

Can completely overlook the errors and look at the bigger picture. Very good story. Can't wait for your next chapter. Gah I just want Ally and Conner to get together already.

I'm so glad that you haven't given up on this story! For a while I was worried. Keep up the great work!

So happy you updated the story PLEASE keep going with it. :D

I want Alexa and Nathan (Conner) to be in a relationship, they need each otheer.

I am loving where this is going!

I really like this story and where it's going. Please, please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. Oh: did I say "please"? Lol.

This was simply excellent! The momentum, OMG.

Can't wait to see what's next !

Please, please, please continue this story. It is one of my favorites...

I c a n t w a i t f o r t h e n e x t s t o r y ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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I really like this story, but there is a whole lot going on. It's difficult to keep up with what is going on.

I had a problem at first keeping up with the different scenes and the flashbacks. But I understand it all now. Too bad it took bella to get her *** kicked to finally wake up and see her dad for what he is....a drug addicted, abuser who takes his frustraions out on the weaker sex! Shame on him! I like Allen, but not for Alexa, you will have to find him a woman and send Alexa back to Connor. Help Connor complete this case so they can be together! Make Bella see she is better than her parents and she deserves the love of a good man!

So much crazy, I'll die if this story is incomplete