All Comments on 'As Soon As You Arrive'

Great job! You got me going... then cumming! Thx...

GREAT WRITTING! MS \JANE MAKES ME WISH I WERE HER SLUT! (OR PONY)

love it love it!!!!! I wish my owner would treat me the same ,now how do i escape to greener pastures. Any hints im surrounded by an electrical fence ,i got out once and hit my cock on it felt amazing , then i got caught again. MW69 fetlife

I'll be honest, I stopped half way through because of the small vocabulary, the word arse, and the fact that you kept on saying his cock was 'wet,' whatever that means. Penises don't get wet....Sooo...Unless he was sweaty, or he lubed it up somehow, it was very unclear or uneducated.

This was so, so hot. :)

And nothing convinced me he'd do anything but leave, jackoff and never go back. Her actions were just dumb and last time I looked unless he had some lotion available his cock isn't getting wet. Cocks don't do that. Poorly written story. No stars.