by Samuelx
3rd story 18th variation ... more of his cut & paste spam
I wish you would stop mentioning Haitians in your stories. I cringe every time because you seriously make us all look bad and this is coming from a Haitian woman.
...or a personal history about Ottawa, Montreal and moralizing about what should/doesn't go on there? That's the only thing truly described--the racism you perceive, shortcomings, etc. There's no description of the sex, no real lead-in to understanding the characters...in short, not even worth a star. You write a lot, but it would be best to have 6 great stories than all these less-than-mediocre ones that don't do a thing except waste a reader's time.