All Comments on 'At Long Last'

Very quick but still romantic. For romance I prefer more background on the people, but you did a good job for 1 page. I would like to see what you could do with a story that had more build up

Thanks for that feedback, this is the first fictional piece I ever wrote. Do you mean more character development, or more of the backstory that lead to the events at the center of the story?

This piece of fiction was described in such excellent detail that I can't help but wonder if you actually experienced this scenario yourself! At any rate, one of the best I've read. The chemistry between the two characters was so steamy, and so very realistic.

Great story very complete and sexy.

That does require a part 2.