All Comments on 'August 22'

GREAT erotica here. A good story, great sex. This seems like a really fun time. You can feel the sexual tension build up. Very good authorship, we see it, feel it, experience it... we are THERE.

That was a really good story and I enjoyed reading it.

I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing.

this is a day i would like to live over and over...great writing

Thanks for a great read. Who knew Aug 22 could be so hot and romantic?

Just the right mix of naughty and romantic. Touching and hot.

Love your story telling.

Ive read a few different stories by you theyre amazing. I wish I was the girl in all of them ;)