All Comments on 'Autumn's Twilight'

ooh. good story. i want to find out what happens! keep writing!

I love virtually everything you write...so I'm a bit biased.

And you are such a whore. -grins softly and makes the telephone sign-

call me.

The author writes clearly, paints a picture of a young couple's encounter with care and compassion.

Unlike two earlier submissions, I noted some basic grammatical issues. It seems almost a universal in this genre that when author's write about gathering emotional issues [and those messy physiologic responses] that in the rush the writing becomes, well, rushed as well. All in all, these issues don't intrude on the story; as this writer's voice matures I'm sure she will take more care. She writes about the young adult's emotional world with such care, I look forward to her insights.

This is a work of art please write more. The playfulness and the description are wonderful. I was really able to get lost in this story that is a wonderful and beautiful thing please continue.

I've already lost interest. Sorry. Too much filler, not enough erotica. Finish it or don't. ... No skin off my back... You know how many wanna be authors are on here? Also... Check out getting an editor.. Pistoling hips? Try pistoning... Damn.💋