All Comments on 'Avon Calling'

But they did not go far enough. They were following the story until she got naked. I would have enjoyed seeing a true illustrated story. So many of the one's I have read only have some drawing or obtuse picture of a girl.

More illustrated stories like this

Loved the story. Was hoping for more graphic pics.

I am a larger married woman and the pictures were an added pleasure for an enjoyble story

mmm mmm good, fatty and naked, just the way we like it.

Pity the photo's weren't a little more revealing......The story sent shivers though my pussy.......can picture me in that position...really!

Nice development of the story....underdeveloped pics. I enjoy drawings more than pics and would love to help.