All Comments on 'Awoken to Fantasy'

by missey_D

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MLyonsMLyonsalmost 20 years ago
This was great!

I don't know why there haven't been more comments on your stories! This was wonderful. The build up of tension, and the excellent use of a very limited 1st person perspective with a narrator who couldn't see what was happening was great, and it turned me on. See my comments in the forum as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent story!

This is very, very good writing. You've captured the fantasy--and the *mystery* of the bondage fantasy--perfectly. Your story perceptively explores the duality inherent in eroticism--and in autoeroticism: the passion that rises from each of us is infinitely personal, and yet we long and hope and fear to share it.

Thank you for sharing this story.

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