All Comments on 'Ayasha's Beast Ch. 02'

Needs longer chapters. But, otherwise a good story.

Same bat time same bat channel.

You go girl! I like her aspirations and I hope they dont get discarded with this man in her life. :D

...of chapters, indeed. Watch for spelling also. Okay so far, but some actual sex on the page would help.

chapters are wayyyy to short.

Im so sorry for making this chapter short, and ive already submitted the next two chapters, while not quite this short, not quite long

BUT

im making chapter 5 up extra long for all those readers who have complained :)

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i hope your enjoying the short so far!

love missanastasia.

OH SNAP!!! I will be waiting on that update!! Keep up the good work.

It sounds like Ayasha's going to have quite an adventure! Other than his need for an industrial strength breath mint, her beast sounds mighty fine. This beast could turn out to be more of a prince than her morally corrupt intended could ever hope to be!

with the others. I would like it if you were to write the chapters a bit longer. But other than that, i really have enjoyed this chapter. I am dieing to know whats going to happen next. Please write the next chapter asap (and possibly longer? lol).

It was short but it made you want to know more.. waiting for the next chapter..

kinda short but it was really good