by Cause n effect
I believe that you have an outstanding start to a nice series. I hope she will decide that what she wants is exacely what he needs. Hopefully this will be a long running seris.
This is absolutely amazing. I feel as if I need to cum sitting here reading this wonderful essay. I want more. Make me feel wanted, needed, abused. Give me more, please don't tease, yes do tease, Oh please, give me more, I need it.
This story reminded me of my Master. He didn't know what to do with me when he met me, but it didn't take long! Thanks for making me smile.
Shylla
I'm very picky about the erotic stories I read. This story is one of my favorites, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
/goes to change panties now...
Well its one of the most erotic , yet unique stories ive read ......Please write more.........
I'm sobbing. You've done an absolutely brilliant job. This story is hot and sexy and romantic as hell. I'm also hoping for more in a series! *greedy grin*
What a shame this seems to be the only story you have published here. What happened to the 'to be continued'? I would have loved to have read more.
I know...... I was just thinking the same thing. Very well written and love the story idea sooooo much.