All Comments on 'BabySitter and the Visitor'

Great story. Nicely done. I liked it quite well.

I know you won't write a sequel, but there's a great one waiting. Amber goes to the prom with her innocent boyfriend, who doesn't know, of course, that she's been raped and deflowered in that very prom dress, She's put some cups inside it so that she doesn't need a bra. Her boyfriend is trying to get the courage as well as to figure out how to discreetly get his hands on her boobs, and she's debating letting him, when she sees Marie's "brother" Neil at the prom, as one of the chaperones ...

It was just another babysitter story from ashson. It had nothing new and nothing of value yet once again the bland mush was being spewed out into the web. Way to make the world just a little bit more mediocre.

Very well told

A stranger who has all this information about the homes' residents? He just walks in calling for Marie without concern for Brad's location does not indicate he might be Marie' side piece. A whole lot of unanswered points here.

Typical babysitting rape fantasy which seems to be this writers(?) main theme. Almost makes ya think he's writing from experience.

Well I enjoyed it!

Another good story, Ashson! You never fail to entertain!

this was fun great writing

Like many others, I lost my virginity at my HS prom. 3 guys got me drunk and all of them fucked me after making me suck their cocks