All Comments on 'Bad Fortune of a Poor Father Ch. 03'

gret start--keep up the good work!

I'm not so sure this story line belongs in the "Loving Wives" category. If these women truly cared anything for there husbands they wouldn't be so distracted by a big fat cock. I don't know yet if I continue to follow this story or not.

There's already an excellent villain to hate in the young stud that destroyed Khaled's mother and father. Now we have the General to hate.

It might make the story a little confusing and water down the first villain if the General is more hateful than the young stud.

Thanks for the chapter.

i like what you write...

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