by kotori
Well-written. . .nicely suspenseful and graphic, but not too flowery, like so many of the stories on this site. Satisfying also because the master is strong, dominant and just cruel enough, but still seems like a real human being. And his slut is also well-drawn and realistic. Very hot.
Not long and drawn out (which could be good or bad), but done very tastefully, kept me going, and definitly hit my hot spot. It's great if you're looking for a good quick read, with a tough dom who loves his girl. Definitly one of my favorites. Didn't blow me away, but this is an idea of what good literotica is: not too many details, well rounded characters, full story. Very well done, author. Thank you for your work.