All Comments on 'Bad Part of Town'

Thank you for your stories, they are well written and edited (the lack of editing by those who post here often drive me close to insanity)

Although I have been reading through all your stories I wanted most to comment on a line at the end of this story that says: "You can't imagine the difference between fucking a woman content in life, and fucking a woman whose soul is on fire with her own torments." - you can't imagine the difference between a man who understands the torment and those who do not. Thank you.

In your writting I feel like you don't give it all... there is more you aren't saying perhaps? It is appreciated... and at the same time... causes distress for someone who has no physical release in her life right now... these words are all I have to satisfy my torment.

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Trying to be edgy with your writing? You ended up being very forgettable.