All Comments on 'Banging On The Palace On Wheels'

I cannot give it 25. Words fail me. Perfectly written, hotter than the solar corona. You are channeling G. McDonald Fraser's immortal character Flashman, but even more depraved than ol' Flashy. Paragon, you are a paragon. Fantastically fucking great hilarious story!! Bring on the farmhouse and the farmer's wife and daughter!

You've brilliantly captured the wonder and magic of India the country and India the woman. Sequel, immediately, please!

Looks like you've been in India enough times to understand the north Indian cast politics.

It took me 20 years of visits for 4 months a year to know only the tip of all that.

Dont meen to nitpick,

I've been on the palace on wheels, and they have things like Condoms, Tampons etc in store in each coach.

Thank you for all of us who have dreamed about sex with Indian women. Your sex scenes did not become boring and mundane but rather were realistically exciting! The storyline keeps the reader with the story and the love making tops everything off!

Now everyone can understand the attraction so many had to the "Hot Indian Babe" site!

I will be looking forward to any additional chapters. The Farm House adventures are awaiting us.

Thank you for sharing your talent!

Well written, and most enjoyable

Looking forward to the sequel

Please favor us with a sequel. Please. So very fine.

Well written and imaginative!

You don't understand India. I think you are really fucked up in your thoughts and understanding.

The build up was great and the action between the characters was awesome.

But you lack in the details about Indian history. And the information about the Dravidians being not brave was so wrong. Perhaps you should know about Dravidians more.

If you do so you will change your mind about your views on Dravidians...

I have to say you three , have to be extremely thin to fit into the shower stall on that train, as you wrote in pg 5.having being to India many times , and being Born a 3rd generation , outside India, . you do have a wild imagination.. but do not understand Indian culture.

The last three leavers of comments, that is. Looking for history and culture in a porn novella?! I enjoyed the story because it is well written porn. Remember, you mental cretins that this is a porn site.

Being a person of Indian ancestry and now living in the USA for 3 decades, I loved the amazing hot sexy story. Very nicely written. I have experienced sex in almost every continent but the way an Indian woman can fuck, is altogether a different experience.

Why have you stopped writing?

I earnestly hope you'll continue.

a very good story, great writing. Would love to read of more exploits about the mother and daughter .

I'm lost so Charlie is at best ordinary not particularly intelligent or charming or genteel or physically attractive or imposing and Indian Women jump all over him because he's White?