All Comments on 'Bar Bets'

by The Mutt

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chatbugchatbugalmost 20 years ago
Unusual Realism

I enjoy unusual stories, and I didn't expect the twist at the end. I could see this event actually happening.

doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
I love your stuff

You have a unique style, and your stories always leave me wanting more ( or needing a cold shower ) LOL

;-)

BarnoBarnoalmost 20 years ago
Great Ending

So many of these stories are just straight forward sex tales. The twist at the end of this one made it all worthwhile.

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
we think alike..

i predicted the ending!! ~winks~

wow, you really are a wonderful writer!

BlackShanglanBlackShanglanover 19 years ago
*laugh* Very nicely done

Great one Mutt. Didn't see it coming, got a big kick out of your twist. Well done!

Don GrampaDon Grampaover 19 years ago
Great Job of Story Writing

Good story. Well written with a plot. Nice ending, in fact the whole story was very good. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Surprising story

I loved your story. I have read lots of stories but,I loved your twist at the end.Very good,very good indeed Mutt.

marieR19marieR19over 16 years ago
great story!

I loved the surprise ending, I totally didn't see that coming! I was laughing with the bets, she was obviously going to win. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
unoriginal

I knew the end the second she said she knew he's a mutt. Stupid unerotic story that should be in fetishes or gay male, since no non consent or reluctance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
teamwork

Why does the music from 'Sting' start playing in my head now?😉

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