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voluptuary_manqueover 16 years agoNeeds an editor
You switched person twice from first to third. Really annoying.
Anonymousover 16 years agoGrammar problems killed this story
Why do you keep capitalizing nouns that shouldn't be capitalized? That plus the other grammar mistakes made the story unreadable. Also this is a fur fetish story so shouldn't the category be fetish not romance?
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