All Comments on 'Bar Scene'

Yes it was fun and engaging.

I could see where it was going after a bit, but a nice read.

when it started, nearly quit reading, but, then as the "game" began to play, it really heated up. With those sort of games, you don't have to bring in other partners for each other and fool yourselves that lust is love. For that you get five stars.

Exquisitely real dialogue. Thank you.

One of my favorites, maybe because the dialog is so real, so us. ~sarah

Beautifully done... Bravo

Thank you! And a visit by the actual Sarah! Hey kitten!

You guys are a treat...have fun - always!!!

(fanning self vigorously)

Such a treat to spend time with these two! Real, immediate, visceral, tangible... altogether delightful. Thank you.

I loved this story ! The running dialogue was absolutely great!!! I think I knew the ending to this, but I still wanted to read it to the end, just to read the dialogue and see how it ended. Please, more stories like this.

Thank you for a great story

The real story began to peak out and that actually made it even better for me. It was all so much fun. The poor schlub bar patron and 'Dave' the bartender were so real. The negotiation was some of the hottest dialog I have read. One of the best times I've had in a bar!

It went pretty much where I thought it was going and I still loved the journey. Thanks for sharing.