All Comments on 'Barb Becomes a Sex Toy Ch. 02'

Sperm detector home test or infidelity test may be a secret equipment for the husbands.

you need to punch it up a bit. Perhaps a bit of lesbian action.

It was good but you could have add some hot scenes to it.

Has she even tried to make things more exciting for her husband? Has she tired to seduce him? Because so far, all she has done is let another man fuck her.

But..bottom line is that while she is getting off with her co-worker her husband is left out in the cold with a cheating slut for a wife....so, not much to enjoy here if you happen to be a husband.

Give the husband a break...divorce him and let him find a women who'll be happy with a faithful husband.

Why would we want to read anymore stories where Carl and Barb fuck over an unsuspecting husband...want a good story, add some consequences, some revenge, and some BTB and kick Carl's ass stuff....then you got a story.

So far, this is essentially an Erotic Couplings story, because Hubby is just a concept which she feels a little guilty for cheating on. But not much, since he has never elicited the reactions her new Bull pulls out of her! If Hubby is not impacted in SOME way (positive or negative or simply 'differently from pre-tryst') then Hubby doesn't need to be in the story AT ALL!

The EC component of this series (Ch1 & Ch2) have been good - and hot, but unless this eventually becomes an LW story, my ratings will drop!

Good story, nice hard edge to it, more soon I hope!

"1*" !

You are a lying piece of cow flop. This is another cuck's sick fantasy. The only truth is that you can't write.

Another writer glorifying the wife becoming a wanton slut with no consequences. Hubby is a good guy and doesn’t deserve the disrespect or betrayal. Alias too many writers are fixated on wives becoming instant sluts with nothing happening to them. Husband is cheated on and he gets nothing for his pain.

What a good follow up, full of good descriptions and still a wet dream to many.

An erotic fuck story

There is actually no story, no plot, just tropes strung together.