All Comments on 'Barry Gets What He Wants'

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jbilovejbilovealmost 14 years ago
SO HOT!!

Please continue this story for all of us fans of this.

Thank you.

Mr. BriggsMr. Briggsalmost 14 years ago
One of the best

One of the hottest stories i've ever read. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good, but needs more proofreading

Almost everything works well in this story, which is why the misplaced and missing commas really distract. Dropping the "After she left" from the first sentence of the second paragraph would make the text flow better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very nice

very nice story... where is the part 2? :D

CoupleFromOhioCoupleFromOhioover 13 years ago
Hot

Great story. My wife knows my desires. I am waiting for the day when she comes home early and catches me with a dildo in my ass. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
One of the best

I need you to write the follow-up to this where they get a strapon and start getting creative. Great story.

JwdoesitJwdoesitalmost 10 years ago

Great story, would like to read more. I'm an anal virgin and often think about sticking something up there.

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