All Comments on 'Beach House Chronicles Ch. 01'

But still worth a top vote in anticipation of the next chapter.

Make it soon.

When you're writing about guys who have just finished college, the writing should meet college level standards for punctuation and grammar.

I think that you should Keep with the story. it is disappointing seeing how many of these stories go unfinished.

Now I remember you. Hmm, foreplay? Buildup? For the plot, characters and sex. Curtis ask Jamie if he can feel his penis and FLASH 'Wy (why) don't we take this into the bedroom.'