by saddisticbeauty
I like how this is going, though I really do hope he comes to understand that he can't be so harsh with her.
a few misused words and some rough spots here and there but mostly good stuff.
Very good! Not like most were stories i read but i still loved it! Cant wait to read the next chapter! Thanks
Your story lives up to your name. I'm lovin this story so far. Think Ben's a bit of a bastard but love him at the same time. Weird. Anyways hope there's not long til the next one.
your story so far is really good. I really like it so far, its very different. Please continue please.
More would be nice, longer chapter and more than 4 chapters. LOL