All Comments on 'Beat of My Heart Ch. 01'

Very nice. I really enjoyed this story. Unfortunately, Literotica forced me to chose between a 75 and a 100, between a perfect A+ and a C. That's really unfair to many authors and readers. This story deserves more than a 75, but I can't give it a 100. As in women, there are almost no perfect 10s. In fact, I don't know of any, but there are many 8 1/2s or 9s and many gradations far above a 75. This story is a 90 in my opinion. Well conceived, well executed, and erotic. Like your heroine, you've been fucked Juan.

lightweight, as entertainment often should be. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

I rated it highly, but I have read exactly this story somewhere before??

AND word for word from memory, but it ain't at SOL or ES. I wonder where it is?

This was a short story and straight to the point. Thump, Thump..............

Well! If you are going to number it 1, where is 2?