All Comments on 'Beaver Tales Pt. 02'

by Rhythm_N_Ooze

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Happy Hunting

Nice happy hunting tale. Sorry for the bad pun but happy that I read these two chapters. "Beaver Tales" so far has been erotic and entertaining in a unique way. There is a bevy of beautiful, married quarry to choose from and I'm looking forward to reading about the next capture. Happy hunting Rhythm_N_Ooze.

Rhythm_N_OozeRhythm_N_Oozeover 13 years agoAuthor
Feedback

I would like to the thank readers who have taken the time to comment on the story so far. I would also like to thank the person who provided information regarding quote conventions for multi-paragraph dialog(ue). Your comment is appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very sexy

The cervical os does not open and suck in semen the way you describe. And having that correct would not detract from the very sexy story.

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