All Comments on 'Becca and Isaiah'

Ok, now you have to write the next chapter! You have the setup going, so what's going to happen next?

So far so good. You confused me a bit on 3 months of dating but one month since that very hot kiss. Which one is it? I thought the kiss was on their first date. Either way good start can't wait to see what happens.

When I got to the end of this chapter, I wanted to scream. More! Now!

Was sort of hoping it was going be a 1 Chp wonder, just so I could have immediate closure (I get very impatient you see!), but now there's a Chp 2 you better get writing soon!!

Very nice story development , ready for what's next. Great first effort

I am curious to find out more....is she going to meet the friends, family and coworkers? Will he keep her his private caramel tinkerbell? What is his next step? How will she respond? She can be very timid, relationshipwise, but will she accept his next step, if there is one?