All Comments on 'Becca and Isaiah'

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MsShyVixenMsShyVixenover 12 years ago
This is niiiice

I am curious to find out more....is she going to meet the friends, family and coworkers? Will he keep her his private caramel tinkerbell? What is his next step? How will she respond? She can be very timid, relationshipwise, but will she accept his next step, if there is one?

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
shaping up nicely

Very nice story development , ready for what's next. Great first effort

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great first submission, well done!

Was sort of hoping it was going be a 1 Chp wonder, just so I could have immediate closure (I get very impatient you see!), but now there's a Chp 2 you better get writing soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hurry up!

When I got to the end of this chapter, I wanted to scream. More! Now!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good job

So far so good. You confused me a bit on 3 months of dating but one month since that very hot kiss. Which one is it? I thought the kiss was on their first date. Either way good start can't wait to see what happens.

DormDadDormDadover 12 years ago
But...

Ok, now you have to write the next chapter! You have the setup going, so what's going to happen next?

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