by Alex451
Good intro. Decent build up I think chapter 2 would be in order. Keep it the same and plz don't fall back on used to death ideas be original and make it good.
There's a game called Catherine with a character, a barmaid, called Erica who is transgendered the game was released in the last week.
that was such a hot story butt it ended to soon i hope i can find the conclusion soon omg itgave me aus=ch a hard on fuck