- BDSM
- Becoming His Ch. 01
- Page 4
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I replied, "Then don't."
End of Chapter 1
Chapter 2 is currently in the works. Comments and feedbacks are welcome to help improve the upcoming chapters. Thank you!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI really enjoyed this chapter, it was well written unfortunately this is where I’m going to have to leave it. Your story is clearly heading towards a Daddy : Little relationship and that’s a hard no for me. Even the last couple of chapters were difficult for me.
Despite them being very different things references to Age Play, Incest etc for personal reasons it just make my skin crawl. So good luck with your writing, I’m out.
Tess (UK)
Rumover 8 years agoThis was really well done. It flowed very well, there was almost no syntax errors (that i remember, anyway). If you didn't have an editor, than I'm that much more impressed. The only thing that I can say negatively is that it was just over the line into the schmaltzy. I realize that it was a romance but (from a male perspective) I couldn't help but feel you went just a tad too mushy (for lack of a better term). Keep up the good work because you are a fine writer.
littlebittyjetabout 9 years agoThis was **fabulous**!! Extremely well written. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
mistressenarieabout 9 years agoWonderful, I can't wait for the next chapter. There are a few errors that can be distracting, however. Keep writing though, the story line is very easy to follow and so exciting.
