by mtsuki
I love the story very much and it got me going with all the intensity.
But there was too much intensity esp from Ryan.
This is not a negative review of the story, I am just looking at real life situations that we all know too much about.
The only problem I do have is that Ryan seems to be so obsessed with Shawn, I can only see heartache everytime Shawn even talk to another guy.
If this were a real life relationship it could only end badly with either Ryan doing something to himself if they breakup or Ryan physically hurting Shawn.
Just my take.
Been there, had that, as they say.
Keep Writing! PLEASE!
I love it! Absolutely love it! But I think that if Ryan were to be so obsessive about Shawn, the relationship can head into trouble. Change my mind with a sequel! Keep writing! PLEASE~
very great story, i really love it. the way the characters were developed. i hope that you continue to write this story line
I loved it :D It was really sweet and well written :)
I really love this! short but sweet; keep going! will there be a sequel? write soon!
This was a cute and slightly angsty story. I felt the connection between the characters and Nathan provided the perfect foil to bring them together. Keep writing; you have talent.
Beautiful! I love the way the characters interact, and I think it's pretty sweet in the end! (: Write soon!
I am so glad I found this story! I have to join in with the other commenters and say I look forward to a sequel, or anything else you may post.
Peace and joy,
Shell
i think you could have done another chapter with this. i enjoyed this though it was a little too fast for my liking. but a very good effort
Am finding your stories to be very interesting and very well written.
Omigosh! This is so damn sweet, I love the passion they have for each other.