All Comments on 'Belong Together'

by mtsuki

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Memory Lane

Reminds me of how my guy and I met. Love it.

WickedWendyDruWickedWendyDrualmost 14 years ago
Delightful

Lovely. Perfectly lovely.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLalmost 14 years ago
Love the Story

I love the story very much and it got me going with all the intensity.

But there was too much intensity esp from Ryan.

This is not a negative review of the story, I am just looking at real life situations that we all know too much about.

The only problem I do have is that Ryan seems to be so obsessed with Shawn, I can only see heartache everytime Shawn even talk to another guy.

If this were a real life relationship it could only end badly with either Ryan doing something to himself if they breakup or Ryan physically hurting Shawn.

Just my take.

Been there, had that, as they say.

Keep Writing! PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nice!

I love it! Absolutely love it! But I think that if Ryan were to be so obsessive about Shawn, the relationship can head into trouble. Change my mind with a sequel! Keep writing! PLEASE~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

very great story, i really love it. the way the characters were developed. i hope that you continue to write this story line

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very Good and Sweet!

I loved it :D It was really sweet and well written :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Absolutely love it!

I really love this! short but sweet; keep going! will there be a sequel? write soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow

I love this story! Post more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Brought a smile to my face

This was a cute and slightly angsty story. I felt the connection between the characters and Nathan provided the perfect foil to bring them together. Keep writing; you have talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I'm in love!

Beautiful! I love the way the characters interact, and I think it's pretty sweet in the end! (: Write soon!

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
Sequel

I am so glad I found this story! I have to join in with the other commenters and say I look forward to a sequel, or anything else you may post.

Peace and joy,

Shell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

i think you could have done another chapter with this. i enjoyed this though it was a little too fast for my liking. but a very good effort

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
mmmm

so yummy!

erotikpassionserotikpassionsalmost 9 years ago
Great

Am finding your stories to be very interesting and very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sweet

Omigosh! This is so damn sweet, I love the passion they have for each other.

ADpenthouseADpenthouseover 8 years ago

please post a sequel of this story.

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