All Comments on 'Best Laid Plans'

Liked your story very much. Rape fantasies can be difficult for me because so many work to make it hardcore realistic. Kinda looses the enjoyable fantasy element if you are convinced it is really real. The use of the code phrase was just right to reassure without breaking character. Glad they didn't do anal. Again, many would have to make it 'real.' Eager for more from you.

The wording was just so damn hot!!!!!!!!!!!

'painted lover' 'desirous stare'

I just kept creaming myself...

Hell I'm in RI, can be in Boston in 40mins...

the word you want is "taut" (for nipples, etc.) not "taught."

No anal...? Awwww. Anal would be soooo good here.

Maybe in the sequel?

Nice story. Wish I had friends like that to rape me. Hot.